One wish. If you had just one wish, what would it be?

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Abandoned House. Covered in vines and cobwebs, this old house once sheltered a family. Who were they? Where did they go? How does the house look now, compared to then?

A good paragraph should have a topic/title, a topic sentence/main idea with with three sentences that support the main idea.  A good paragraph should end with a concluding sentence or a clincher! 

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Write About This Picture in Any Genre

Beauty

Describe the most beautiful person in the world to you – real or imagined, physically or intellectually, using whatever definition of beauty you choose.

A good paragraph should have a topic/title, a topic sentence/main idea with with three sentences that support the main idea.  A good paragraph should end with a concluding sentence or a clincher! 

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What did they do well? WHY

What can they improve? HOW