Create Your Own Utopian Society

CREATE A UTOPIAN SOCIETY!
Please write a descriptive paragraph describing your own utopia!
What would it look like?
How would it feel to be a part of that society?
What are the rules of that society?

Please use vivid language that helps the reader create a mind movie of your perfect society!

Paragraph: The worst vacation to take would have to be...

A good paragraph should have a topic/title, a topic sentence/main idea with with essential details that support the main idea.  A good paragraph should end with a concluding sentence or a clincher!  

 

 

 

After posting your own paragraph please evaluate at LEAST one other peer.  

What did they do well? WHY

What can they improve? HOW

My favorite time of day is____________becuase...

A good paragraph should have a topic/title, a topic sentence/main idea with with three sentences that support the main idea.  A good paragraph should end with a concluding sentence or a clincher!  

After posting your own paragraph please evaluate at LEAST one other peer.  

What did they do well? WHY

What can they improve? HOW