Paragraph: The worst vacation to take would have to be...

A good paragraph should have a topic/title, a topic sentence/main idea with with essential details that support the main idea.  A good paragraph should end with a concluding sentence or a clincher!  

 

 

 

After posting your own paragraph please evaluate at LEAST one other peer.  

What did they do well? WHY

What can they improve? HOW

My favorite time of day is____________becuase...

A good paragraph should have a topic/title, a topic sentence/main idea with with three sentences that support the main idea.  A good paragraph should end with a concluding sentence or a clincher!  

After posting your own paragraph please evaluate at LEAST one other peer.  

What did they do well? WHY

What can they improve? HOW