Beauty

Describe the most beautiful person in the world to you – real or imagined, physically or intellectually, using whatever definition of beauty you choose.

A good paragraph should have a topic/title, a topic sentence/main idea with with three sentences that support the main idea.  A good paragraph should end with a concluding sentence or a clincher! 

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After posting your own paragraph please evaluate at LEAST one other peer.  

What did they do well? WHY

What can they improve? HOW